air 发表于 2013-7-25 17:56:06

用英语回报社会~

The first point is about the work we do.In the past thousands of years,we know the artist always become famous after they dead.(Of course some of them get something wrong,who knows~)Someone said that they were born in wrong times and someone point out that it is a joke form God.But what I saw was people around them never care what they do even shut down their target toward the life.And in now we also have many guys like them around us.
    Like your roommate(Here I need to thank you,my roommate for you couldn't kill me.)who clean the dorm everyday(That's what I did for a long time.)and you never care it.Maybe someday he become famous because he dead and no one clean the room lead to you all think of him.(laught~)
    It also make sense between lovers.Here I have some words:Don't take people's care for granted. No matter how much they love you, people get tired eventually.If you thought The Other Half never respond your paid,you just need to "die" for a while.Beacause people become truly care after lose.It is quiet sad but it is a truth!
    The second point is about the adamancy.In this world,all of us may feel lonely while facing the frustration.It isn't Animation,no one may save you even though you truly in danger.No partner will come in time and save you from deep waters!(A boy watch many animations and hope the scene like that may truly become.)After hoping someone for help and then disappoint and face danger alone as many times,the boy learn the adamancy.
    Even though,It's quiet true that no one may come,but boy even hope someone may ask:need a hand?
    Telling the truth I didn't so strong in your imagination.But I just trying be adamancy,for alone.http://cnc.qzs.qq.com/ac/b.gif         

fgfgssaa11 发表于 2013-7-25 19:16:01

目测你要跪

icelicious 发表于 2013-7-25 19:17:26

前排围观扣分
另外语法错误太多差评

laiyangfan888 发表于 2013-7-25 19:21:10




语法错误一箩筐。。。而且不能纯外语

小鸟游六花☆ 发表于 2013-7-25 19:41:49

同学英语过四级了没有
围观违规扣分

ZDLITI 发表于 2013-7-25 19:54:51

没装在线翻译插件。。。。跪了

jeffwhy 发表于 2013-7-25 19:57:23

louzhudeyingyushuipingzhengao,keshiwodeyebucha~#173#

ljm1121 发表于 2013-7-25 20:05:18

jeffwhy 发表于 2013-7-25 19:57 static/image/common/back.gif
louzhudeyingyushuipingzhengao,keshiwodeyebucha~

你上钩了，走好~

shadowlike 发表于 2013-7-25 20:09:17

嗯，好吧，我大概看懂了，but，it is none of my business，isn't it？

FateViewer 发表于 2013-7-25 20:26:38

双双入网啊。。。

人干事 发表于 2013-7-25 21:09:07

不想看怎么破……

灾星人 发表于 2013-7-25 21:13:51

我看看不说话

kemax1 发表于 2013-7-25 21:38:20

不作死就不会……

汪星人 发表于 2013-7-25 22:34:57

純粹圍觀一下四小時前我不在不然還可以拯救一下

darkangel_911 发表于 2013-7-25 22:36:20

楼主，你要被和谐了{:6_670:}

1208208820 发表于 2013-7-25 23:18:27

汗楼主这句英语害死不少人啊

sora1809 发表于 2013-7-25 23:51:52

楼主你这是口语吧{:7_521:}

liu123654321 发表于 2013-7-26 00:19:36

一巴掌脸打肿了-，-

O-O_Mr.眼镜兄 发表于 2013-7-26 00:23:01

发帖不足25汉字被扣分了哦。可以编辑够25字后@水区版主撤销评分（以前可以的，不知道现在行不行

NOKIA 发表于 2013-7-26 00:28:14

楼上眼镜兄是好人呢~{:6_671:}←围观不说话的坏人...

huiq0017 发表于 2013-7-26 02:36:41

貌似版规规定的是汉字吧...

jack0070707 发表于 2013-7-26 08:23:37

真可怜。。。好歹打个字数补丁嘛。。。

然后全文出现人称代词过多，几乎都是陈述句，还都是短句，这点可以慢慢向倒装句靠拢，要不然多乏味。

口语化没啥不好的~~~敢说就能练粗来~~~

加油吧骚年，当你可以把两句话短语用一句长句来代替掉时，保你高考英语作文好评~~

yiqieyichengtai 发表于 2013-7-26 11:30:05

你这是用英语报复社会吧？又一个中枪的孩子。

四糸乃 发表于 2013-7-26 11:33:17

孩子 不做死就不会死 你怎么就不明白
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